Great design, although the page looks a little overlong and the masthead seems squashed, - the masthead never changes size - it must be consistent dimensions. Perhaps just two masks looming out of the darkness? Also, the phrase'Bringing the past into the present...' etc seems overlong and is in the wrong position, it should be to one side, perhaps just use the first line over two lines and move it to the edge? Or use the same tagline as Remi's poster 2 -Don't get caught in the past- this would create cohesiveness over your group's ancillary products.
Here is the magazine cover for our film 'The Venetian Mask'.
Great design, although the page looks a little overlong and the masthead seems squashed, - the masthead never changes size - it must be consistent dimensions. Perhaps just two masks looming out of the darkness? Also, the phrase'Bringing the past into the present...' etc seems overlong and is in the wrong position, it should be to one side, perhaps just use the first line over two lines and move it to the edge? Or use the same tagline as Remi's poster 2 -Don't get caught in the past- this would create cohesiveness over your group's ancillary products.
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